I love to go to church, I was born and race in a very religious and strict house hold. But I enjoy my Sunday services. I like to go to the movies with loved ones. I love to travel, the main reason why I want to be successful is to one day travel the world. I enjoy having family get together. I enjoy working, currently I have 2 jobs, which drove me to take online courses, both jobs are full-times, plus a full-time student.
I've had the same best friend since middle school. Our friendship goes for more than a decade. Her name is Marlin and she is from Dominican Republic. Many times she has told me that she didn't like me much when she first saw me, till she met me. I was kind of a bully/spoiled brat as a little girl. I understand why wouldn't she like me. Too honest, said things brutally the way they came out. Now as a grown woman she said that I have matured and say only what's asked. According to her and other friends, I am a good listener, give good advice, and I love to help others, I respect everyone's ways of being or thinking, as long as they are not affecting me or others. I guess that those are some of the good and bad qualities that I have heard if my self, and hey, I can't be that bad if she's still in my life after so many years.
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Affirmation
Being confident
about my self
takes a lot more
than just a
pretty face and
nice body.
Sometimes,
being smart is all.
Having light on my own
and being original with
a good heart
was what made me feel
better.
I have let people
say hurtful things,
and mean actions
that will forever stay in my mind,
But as long
as no one takes away my confidence
and shine
I guess I'll be alright.
Kiara,
ReplyDeleteGood first post. I really like your design, and you included some good pictures that represent who you and your friends are. That's great that you've had a friend since middle school. That sounds like a great best friend.
You have a talent for writing, and you tell a good story. Try to always balance out your paragraphs, so that they all have a similar length and strength.
Your poem is good, but it is not an acrostic poem. Recall the instructions, you were required to write an acrostic poem, using one of the affirmations that I provided. Did you not see this part of the instructions?
Overall, I think it's a good start. Good for you for working two jobs and taking on school. I hope that you can maintain that energy all semester.
GR: 83